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Rika the Nightmare

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I was not happy with the old Rika drawing, and since I had some new+older ideas wanted to try out, I decided to redraw the whole thing.

This was finished a week ago but I didn't have enough time to submit it to groups, so I decided to upload it today |||OTL
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I'm really disapointed that none of the critiques below are really helpful. A critique should be pointing out the flaws in a postive way to improve but also pointing out what they have done right.

Now excuse my typos and spelling since I am not the great at spelling as most people know.

First off the hair is what really catches my eye on this. The highlights are beautiful on this and the skin as well. Though I think that the shading should be darker down below more as well.

As for the body it is very well done but I find the hips a bit too wide for someone that has no chest at all. just seems too un-natural to me. Also the ears should be more fluffy around the bottom where they meet with the head.

The facial expression is wonderful and the eyes are just beautiful. Amazing job over all and I wish you the best of luck on your art.