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Submitted: June 30, 2012
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Rika the Nightmareby *Kerikaza

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Paintings

I was not happy with the old Rika drawing, and since I had some new+older ideas wanted to try out, I decided to redraw the whole thing.

This was finished a week ago but I didn't have enough time to submit it to groups, so I decided to upload it today |||OTL

Critique by ~CloudyMidnightStars Sep 6, 2012, 2:11:17 PM

To me, i really love how the eyes were made and i also love how you made the body too.
For the hair, i think it is something different but cute and i love the little chains on her and her expression.
Basically, i love the drawing all together but maybe the background needs a little something more, but i like everything else!
This is just my opinion is all, but i also hope that my opinion will help you think with your other drawings, and i forgot to mention that i love the hair. Best part are the eyes.

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Critique by =Shiro-x Aug 30, 2012, 9:19:06 PM

I'm really disapointed that none of the critiques below are really helpful. A critique should be pointing out the flaws in a postive way to improve but also pointing out what they have done right.

Now excuse my typos and spelling since I am not the great at spelling as most people know.

First off the hair is what really catches my eye on this. The highlights are beautiful on this and the skin as well. Though I think that the shading should be darker down below more as well.

As for the body it is very well done but I find the hips a bit too wide for someone that has no chest at all. just seems too un-natural to me. Also the ears should be more fluffy around the bottom where they meet with the head.

The facial expression is wonderful and the eyes are just beautiful. Amazing job over all and I wish you the best of luck on your art.

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~Mizookie May 5, 2013 New member

aw! shes so cute!

=ForbiddenImmortality May 1, 2013

dem hairs flows and censorship~~!
nice work with the cracks on the floors as well~~

~sonjabron Mar 28, 2013

how do you make this? i like the way how this is art.
maybe i make my own anime/manga but i cant make manga/anime alone cartoon. and its really hard to worked on this.

great job, great job!

~Brony4l1fe Mar 20, 2013

why does this remind me of Luna? I like it.

~wermm2 Feb 26, 2013

Wow very shmexy!

~LoliconNorimaki Feb 16, 2013 Hobbyist Artist

*__________*!!!!

~Wolfantom Jan 25, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Uhh, this is more effective than I planned. This is dangerous, I swore i'd never get into Loli... but.... but...

Kidding. It's very good, nice work.

~Luemery Dec 30, 2012

You, sir, are awesome
I love the image, simply loved it, the shadows, the colors, everything!
The purple in the image really caught my eyes, being a really mysterious color for me.
The shades really helped the mysterious feeling I felt looking at this picture
The eyes, oh, the eyes, I was staring at them for like... 10 minutes... the way you made them is perfect, the color change from top to bottom, oh my!
In other words: Perfect work, I made this account just to comment on it and favorite it.
I, now, deify you.
Cheers from Brazil.
You are awesome.