She looks really good. The teddy bear is also well done. I guess the main issue I'm having though, is the effect of the lighting. Seems like the majority of the light is coming from the moon outside the window, yet the shadows don't reflect that as strongly as I would expect. Then if there is also lighting coming from the inside, and that's why the shadows are being downed a bit... then I feel the wall shouldn't be as dark as it is ._. I'm nitpicking I know, but your work is really very good, so to find something to critique requires me to nitpick
Quick! Hide her before the mods find her! Seriously, they removed a picture of Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen (15) checking the cup size of Lynette Bishop (15) where both were nude but not even a nipple was shown.
When using SAI, even if the "recommended" size is about 8000x8000px for my PC, I draw in 5000x5000px and it still gets stuck and says there's not enough memory from time to time :U I restart the computer, empty the recycle bin and maybe also defrag it. If that doesn't work, I try to merge layers or just save it as PNG and keep working on that to fix it though U.U
Anyway! Lovely girl you drew here This picture has such a nice feel to it, it's like it's telling me a story
ugh, that sucks;; I know! It didn't let me save but in .sai I saved, restarted the computer, re-opened it and saved it in png, and then started working on the png and I could finish it properly;; Hope you can find a way around this!